1. She won the award for her tireless efforts promoting breastfeeding.
2. The new headquarters will use 17,000-square-feet in an existing building.
3. Engineering fees are estimated to run about $423,000.
4. He has spent 6-plus months in a half-way house.
5. She was surprised nobody had launched a coop locally.
1. She won the award for her tireless efforts promoting breast-feeding.
AP Stylebook states: breast-feed, breast-feeding, breast-fed
2. The new headquarters will use 17,000 square feet in an existing building.
3. Engineering fees are estimated to be $423,000."Estimated" and "to run about" are redundant.
4. He has spent six-plus months in a halfway house.
5. She was surprised nobody had launched a co-op locally.
1 comment:
Sorry, Jay, but there's also a flub in the intro sentence. It says "Fine the flub." Perhaps find?
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