All of the examples of style errors in this week's post were made in the last seven days. And these are errors I've written about several times before, in e-mails and in this blog.
I have an important question for writers at The Forum. What can I do to get you to read these posts regularly? Obviously, because of the number of repeat errors, that isn't being done now. One suggestion is to name names. But I don't think that would go over well.
Example one:
Raw copy, wrong--"nearly hour-long hearing"
It should be--"nearly hourlong hearing"
AP Stylebook also says it's daylong, monthlong, weeklong.
Example two:
Raw copy, wrong--"coworkers of convicted"
It should be--"co-workers of convicted"
Example three:
Raw copy, wrong--"work part-time after school"
It should be--"work part time after school"
Example four:
Raw copy, wrong--"there are more than 800 Edible Arrangements franchises world-wide"
It should be--"there are more than 800 Edible Arrangements franchises worldwide"
Example five:
Raw copy, wrong--"an email and telephone scam"
It should be--"an e-mail and telephone scam"
Example six:
Raw copy, wrong--"the school board accepted the resignation"
It should be--"the School Board accepted the resignation"
Example seven:
Raw copy, wrong--"says fifth grade teacher Rob Beer"
It should be--"says fifth-grade teacher Rob Beer"
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